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It felt good, his middle and index finger inside of you. His thumb massaging your clit. You moan as he stops. ' my turn ' he mumbles taking his fingers out of you. He takes your hand and places it on his D. As you start pleasuring him he  goes on pleasuring you. You tease him. 'you shouldnt do that ' he growls. 'do what ?' You ask smiling. Again Michael stops. He turns you around and sits up. Now you sit on his lap and you could feel his penis. ' you shouldn't tease me. ' he warns you.
' but I do, so what will you do ?' You whisper back. 'we'll see '.
Now you're under him again. Mike takes your bra off and then slowly kisses his way down from your boobs to your clit. You couldn't help but shiver. Mikey starts kissing you on/at your thighs. Your right leg, your left leg and so on. Till he landed /there /. You could see his big grin and a few seconds later he licks you /there/ leaving soft kisses on your skin. You flinch as he makes use of his tongue. You wanchted to put your legs together, but mike stopped you. Again he teases you, but this time you can tease him back.